独立主格结构的题 改错

独立主格结构的题 改错

He lay on his book,his hands were crossed under his head.答案是将它改成:he lay on his book,his hands crossed under his head .能不能改成he lying onhis book,his hands were crossed under his head.为什么?我没悬赏分了对不起大家T^T

问答/414℃/2024-05-04 05:12:27

优质解答：

首先,让我们从语法上比较一下这两个句子：

1.He lay on his book,his hands crossed under his head .

句子主干：He lay on his book.

his hands crossed under his head 是独立主格结构作伴随状语.

其中,his hands是crossed under his head的逻辑主语(因为两者是被动关系,故用过去分词).

2.He lying on his book,his hands were crossed under his head.

he lying on his book是独立主格结构作伴随状语,

其中,he是lying on his book的逻辑主语(两者之间是主动关系,故用现在分词).

而his hands were crossed under his head.成了句子的主干.

因此,你那个改法从理论上来说是完全正确的,因为它符合语法规则,也符合改错的基本原则：一个错只改一个词.

但在实际的语言运用中,很少这么说的,第1种改法更常见,也更能表达说话者要突显的主要内容:He lay on his book.

试想一下：是He这个主体重要还是his hands(只是He这个主体的一部分)这个肢体重要?

既然是伴随状语,那它肯定不如句子的主干重要.因此,我们应该把人（He)这个主体放在句中重要的位置上,即放在句子的主干中,这样就不难理解为什么第1种改法更好.

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